dinsdag 16 september 2014

♥ {fanfiction 1} ♥ chapter 5 ♥


c’s prov:
I’m kinda jealous of connor that he get the oooh so beautiful Jamie. But I guess I gotta deal with it. Why doesn’t she choose for me? Am I that ugly? Did I mess up that much? Is it really as bad as it sounds like? “Ooh I forgot to text her” I said.
TO: Jamie
FROM: jc
Heey can I pick u up at 7. Cuz its 4 p.m. I guess you take a long time 
She texted me back:
TO: jc
FROM: Jamie
Of course. Cant wait for 2nite. Its so exiting!! 
I smiled. I really like her. Would she like me if I brought a rose? I went to ricky to get my tuxedo. I like tuxedo’s. they suit me really good. I did my hair and I just stood there realizing the girl I like is really liking another guy. I decided to pick her up and go to the restaurant we went the last time but this time I told myself I should not get so drunk again. “so you want something?” I asked her. “yeah, I would like some spaghetinni with cheddar cheese sause” she smiled. She was different the last time. “okay, can I ask something?” I asked again. “sure” she smirked. “why were you so quiet the last time we dated?” I quietly asked. “uuuhm i-i-i-i-I” she sadly said. “what?” I said. “c-c-c-c-connor told me he also liked me, but he thought it was mean and rude to kiss his best friends girlfriend” she told me. “ooh” I quietly said.
Jamie’s pov:
I just told him the truth. I really told him that connor also liked me. How is he gonna react? “i-i-i-I didn’t knew that” he quietly said. He react nicely,he didn’t cry. He was just shocked. Sitting there staring outside. I guess I shouldn’t have said that. “a-a-a-a-are you okay?” I said. “yeah I was just thinking of something” he said. “okay” I smiled. He stood up to get some food and he also got us drinks. “lets just don’t talk about last week okay?” he asked nicely. “okay” I said. The date went over and we went to his room, this time hes wasn’t drunk. He said: “Jamie I brought you something”. “its not going to be a kiss again?” I asked. “no of course not” he said as he gave me a rose. “aaahw thanks jc” I said while he handed the rose. O sniffed the rose and I grabbed a bottle to put the rose in. I gave jc a hug. I could see he liked it. I’m glad. He stroke my cheak and I blushed. “jc i-i-I “ I stottered. “its okay” he told me cause he knew what I was gonna say. Then he gently kissed me, I kinda knew that it was gonna happen. We let go of eachother, and I stared into his eyes. “i-i-i-I’m sor..” he stottered but interrupted him. “its okay” I said and I smiled. “I am so glad that all the fighting is over” he smiled. “hahah yes me to” I said.
Connor’s pov:
Wow I didn’t know that a date could take so long. What are they doing? Well I’m glad she likes me. You know what I’m gonna text her.
TO: Jamiepamie
FROM: connor frickin’ fanta
Hey where are you? Are u alright. Well are u enjoying the date?
I waited ten minutes but she didn’t react. Is she really alright? But suddenly she called me.
C= connor J=jamie
J: hey I’m coming to the hotelroom
C:okay did you enjoy the date?
J: yeah but I gotta hang up.
And she hang up. I missed her, her hug, her everything. She entered the room. “hey i…” I said but she interruped me. “we gotta talk” she said. O no, when your crush says we gotta talk it 9 out of 10 times means that she breaks up with you. “pffff, how am I gonna tell you this” she said. “are we gonna break up?” I asked. “no, but I and jc kinda kissed” she quietly said. “WHAT??!!” I said. She told me they werent gonna kiss. My girl, did I just lost her. “I am so sorry” she said. I stood up and walked away angry. How could she??!!
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